Poem ... or just a bunch of lines ?

Question

Better hide before the morning comes

When the vultures come to feast their thirsty egos

Factories start to crank , chains are oiled, set

As the townspeople stagger for their feast

Fresh beating hearts pump the blood into their mouths

I have to go around with a smile and serve them

Little do they know I know their game and how to beat them

Still ignorance will still be served

With the finest of the brains

At Everyday hotel

Answer 1

I actually like it...

It is different, which is always good

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Answer 2

what?

i don't get it at all....but uhm, it sounds good?

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Answer 3

I personally think this is ingenius!!!  What really struck me (amongst many other lines) was line 2.  I absolutely love it (the whole piece).  Job WELL done.