Poem???????

Question

plz tell me what u think and a name for the poem if you can thnx (:

To be in love is what she sought,

At least that's what she thought,

Now she loves all by chance,

It's nothing like true romance,

Hopes held high, till the very end,

Calm and unaware of what was about to attend,

A deed worse than any petty crime,

He had lost her heart for the final time,

Now she knows what she has done,

All she can do is try and run,

What she did was follow her heart,

Now it's left all broken apart,

Wishing not to die in shame,

Wanting to be all the same,

Looking down beneath the skies,

Nothing but her faintly cries,

Her heart was lost as soon as it was found,

Sinking into her fate, until she drowned,

Nothing left to embrace,

Except the bitter envy across her face,

Answer 1

I like the poem because it flows very well.  Try calling it "Moving on"  or "Escape"

Answer 2

I like it... It is a story that is not that happy but very well said. The name... Well, that is the biggest problem for me too. Try Broken love, if you like. :-)

Please could you have a look at this?   http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 3

Great poem, love it.

Bitter Envy

Nothing Left to Embrace

Broken

Broken Apart

Basically any set of words you used in your poem

Answer 4

I like it. didn't flow though. but you got what you were saying across in a genuine way... don't like how you bring a he in near the middle and not speak if him again... but yeah i like it

Answer 5

i sure like the last line kinda feel sad for her ,but i got ntn for a name-gj

Answer 6

WOW!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! But don't just name it from a phrase from the poem, name it from the mood, the feeling, emotions, the state of mind the girl is in. Anyway, good luck finding a Title!

Peace!!!!