Poem??????????

Question

arr yeah tell me what you think of it and think of a name too plx (: thnx also does anyone know how to choose your pic on here like upload a photo from your computer and make it your picture for yahoo answers cos i hate this shadow face (: thnx

To be in love is what she sought,

At least that's what she thought,

Now she loves all by chance,

It's nothing like true romance,

Hopes held high, till the very end,

Calm and unaware of what was about to attend,

A deed worse than any petty crime,

He had lost her heart for the final time,

Now she knows what she has done,

All she can do is try and run,

What she did was follow her heart,

Now it's left all broken apart,

Wishing not to die in shame,

Wanting to be all the same,

Looking down beneath the skies,

Nothing but her faintly cries,

Her heart was lost as soon as it was found,

Sinking into her fate, until she drowned,

Nothing left to embrace,

Except the bitter envy across her face,

Answer 1

I enjoyed this poem.  It's a sad story.

My favorite stanza was the first one.

Answer 2

i like this a lot....maybe "envy" could be a name, or even "the nameless" it kinda gets too rhyme tho...just saying....it feels a bit Dr.Seuss, other than that its great and very emotional ;D

Answer 3

I dont really get the strory line, but i get a really good picture of this girl in my mind, and what she is doing. I liked it!

Answer 4

edit info,post a pic from your yahoo 360 or choice the av ones

thanks for the words of wisdom

for a name -empty

everytime i read this poem it gets better gj

Answer 5

i like it

Answer 6

Beauitful poem, i feel sorry for the girl and sad