Poem?????????

Question

ok let me know what you think of this plz and if u could think of a title (:

Enjoying a life, only true in my mind,

For it to be taken away, for someone else to find,

Never given the chance to see what could have been,

The deepest love you held within,

Not knowing left from right,

Loosing all faith throughout the night,

Still trying to grasp yet another used heart,

Before it gets all torn apart,

Wondering what will happen next?

Another dream in the wrong context,

To dead for anything to succumb,

Until the time has come,

Please believe your eyes,

For when we say our good byes,

No one will ever again stray,

But no one will ever truly be here to stay,

Answer 1

That really touching. I hope you continue to write poems, and your strength is definetly in writing poems about thing that make people realize the truth. That the world isnt perfect, and its better for us to know its flaws. I rate it a 10. The rhyming is very good.

Answer 2

whats it about life? its very all over the charts contradictory...

pretty otherwise, I just don't understand the message.

Answer 3

"Lovers in the night"