Poem "River" please critique

Question

copyright Kristen Varwig

Down by the river

The feeling is high,

I think about you

And how you passed by.

I step into the water,

Let it soothe my pain

As it rushes around me

It drives me insane.

Down by the river,

Where the water is low

I watch it run past

Think of where it must go.

I sip of the water,

It knows me by name,

It's to bitter to swallow

But, I do, just the same.

Down by the river

The echoes are high

I watch you slip away,

On this bank where I lie

Answer 1

Its okay. But don't deviate from the topic.  

Answer 2

You are definitely good ....and going to go places . Like the imagery ..

great work ! All the Best !

Answer 3

i loved it

Answer 4

it's great