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Poem; respond or not. =)?

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South of Superstition

Can you hear the sunlight beaming,

Flickering through these trees of mist;

Can you taste this blue crimson darkness

Cast from these ancient monoliths sailing slowly,

slowly, by.

Can you smell the beat of this heart

Humming this waltz infinity dreaming;

Can you see this kiss, this adoration

Whispering in shadows for you and me-

-This one touch of your skin

(screams)

This one look into your eyes

(needs)

This one breath of your soul

(hurts)

This one kiss of your lips

(burns)

To feel just one beat of your heart singing..

..softly..

... in this crimson lavender cyclone,

This spectral sweet evenshade spiraling,

Dancing in darkness forever free.

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  1. I LOVE THE MIDDLE PART!!!!

    AWESOME!!!!

    DID YOU WRITE IT!!!!

    VERY GOOD!!!


  2. I love it! It's relaxing and beautiful wording.

  3. The rhythm and wording are nice. I like the synestasia

  4. love it!

    such strong imagery..  

  5. It's very nice.  Loving, lonely, subdued, and passionate all mixed together.

  6. amazing. . .

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