Poem/song, whatcha think???????????

Question

"Part of Me"

I feel so many feelings

I have so many dealings

I can't help but wonder why

why does this make me cry?

I can't stop lying to your face

I can't stop loving you in this case

half of me wants you

other half doesn't want me to stay true

Part of me want's to stay

part of me wants to run away

I don't know which one to follow or which one to trust

part of me must

run away and break your heart

part of me doesn't wanna part

I'm so confused

which part do I choose?

(whispers: part of me, part of me, part of me)

I can't go on, much more long

I keep doing wrong

I keep on doing right

part of me wants to make everything alright

I don't know what to do

I can't make it through

looking at your face

I think what a descrase

I think how lovely

Your the one and only

(screams: NO!)

Part of me want's to stay

part of me wants to run away

I don't know which one to follow or which one to trust

part of me must

run away and break your heart

part of me doesn't wanna part

I'm so confused

which part do I choose?

(whispers: part of me, part of me, (screams: PART OF ME!)

Part of me,

part of me,

part of me,

I can't go on

much more long

I dunno if I should stay

or if I should go away.......

Part of me

This heart you see

is filled with glee

is filled with hurt

what do I do?

Do I love you?

Or do I hate everything about you?

I really dunno what to do.....

Part of me want's to stay

part of me wants to run away

I don't know which one to follow or which one to trust

part of me must

run away and break your heart

part of me doesn't wanna part

I'm so confused

which part do I choose?

(whispers: part of me, part of me, part of me)

What do you think?

Answer 1

I think it's fantastic! As always :)))) Go ahead.... Oh yeah you told me that you're waiting for the right moment to publish them: when is it??? Tell me when you do pls!