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Poem to a loved one on the other side of the world...does this sound ok?

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We sent you a hug on the wind today, the sun was out, but the sky was grey. We share so much yet we're so far away. One day we'll travel to you and stay.....forever.

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thats amazing!=]
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It's lovely,

You can tell it's from the heart
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BEAUTIFUL. SHORT, BUT HAS A LOT OF MEANING, AND THATS WHAT MATTERS. I WOULD LOVE IT IF I RECEIVED A POEM LIKE THIS FROM MY LOVED ONE :). VERY CUTE.
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Straight from the heart, it sounds right, nothing wrong with it.

Just in a few sentence, makes me miss my family, even though they are not gone.
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Lovely!!
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yup
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Nice...and I could relate to it...my sweetie is in Italy!
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aww, that's awfully sweet.

I agree with everyone else that its amazing what a good message you send with so very few words.....

have a star!

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OMG! that was so passionate! i love it! my 21 year old sister is crying. its sooooooo pretty. if like you were a guy and i was your gf and you were sending it to me then honey id come flyin home. LOVE IT! KEEP WRITIN
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awww!

thats nice =o)
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its cute.
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