Poem turned into a <span title="song...thoughts...ideas...comments?">song...thoughts...ideas.....</span>

Question

it was a poem then i added the choruses to it

its my life

thats turning upside down

i feel so alone

wondering why

Im so sad

Chorus

I feel so lost

So confused and dazed

Where do I go from here?

Slipping away

Into the darkness

I cry

Lonely in this world

Seems so far

To live to the fullest

I dread of

Waking up

To live another day

Chorus

I feel so lost

So confused and dazed

Where do I go from here?

Slipping away

Into the darkness

I cry

Rain is falling

From the cloudy skies

Every tear I make

It rolls down

On my cheeks

Looking up to the stars

Wishing to be free

From all this misery

Knowing it’ll never happen

No, it'll never happen

Chorus

I feel so lost

So confused and dazed

Where do I go from here?

Slipping away

Into the darkness

I cry

Life is what

I make of it

I dont know how, though

What do I do now?

Chorus

I feel so lost

So confused and dazed

Where do I go from here?

Slipping away

into the darkness

I cry

Answer 1

I cant find the beat.

Answer 2

i can imagine it (as a modern rock-ish/ punk-ish song), would be a petty decent song id say

i have a friend who writes acoustic music (not famous at all... just decent), im going to give him the lyrics to see if he can do anything with it

Answer 3

i think that was beautiful and you are very talented. :)

Answer 4

The last chorus should be full of hope after a dismall lot of previous verses ~~

Answer 5

[e-mail]

He is a very talented composer in Australia with quite a portfolio for such work.

He isnt hard to track down if you really want it done.