Poem what do u think?

Question

its funny how hello is always accompanied with goodbye.

its funny how good memories, can start to make you cry.

its funny how forever, never really seems to last.

its funny how much you’d lose, if you forgot about your past.

its funny how “friends”, can just leave you when your down.

its funny how when you need someone, they never are around.

its funny how people change, and think they’re so mush better.

its funny how much lies, can be packed in one love letter.

its funny how people forgive, even though they can’t forget.

Its funny how one night, can conatin so much regret

its funny how ironic, life turns out to be.

but the funniest part of all, is that none one this is funny to me.

Answer 1

oooooooo i love it! it has a really nice flow to it and everything! its very very good

i agree you should get this published....be careful what you post on websites... its really good and people coud try to steal it and call it their own

Answer 2

I love it. It's real, not all that other c**p people are writing.

Keep writing more and posting it.

Your really good! I like how you repeated the line, "It's Funny".

It's really great. <3

Answer 3

You're encredibly insightful! How old are you, and what other work have you done?

Getcha self published, I wanna read more!

Answer 4

I like! =) but there are tooo many " its funny how" you should take some out and just use commas.

Answer 5

I think you listed some nice contrasts here.

I didn't like the reptition of the word funny, and spelled maybe two words wrong.

Answer 6

nice