Poem wording help please?

Question

How should I say this line...

Her whisper PLACES him at peace

And nature in motion.

OR

Her whisper PUTS him at peace

And nature in motion.

I'm torn. Which makes more sense?

Answer 1

PUTS him at peace makes more sense. Put someone at peace, put nature in motion. Yeah, that's better.

Answer 2

#3 Her whisper PUTS him at peace,  <--- use a comma to join the thought

SETS nature in motion.

just because I really do not like to see the word "and" any more than absolutely necessary.

Answer 3

I would go with

her whisper puts him at peace

and nature in motion

I am going to change that line

(Putting nature in motion.)

I line the second line.

Answer 4

I personally like puts better than places, but what about...

Her whisper leaves him at peace

and nature in motion.

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Answer 5

put