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Question

I see your face

and find my place,

It’s like a high,

and I don’t know why,

I’m drawn to your presence,

i love your essence.

Now what am I to do,

Every time I look at you,

my face turns red

and thoughts fill my head

I am nobody, not good enough

So should I bluff?

Lie to myself, pretend I don’t like you?

When thinking about you is all I do

you are the one idea in my mind

what is the point of this though –what will I gain or find?

I’m hoping it’s you,

but will this wish every come true?

Most likely not,

my heart shall rot.

I’m not trying to be dramatic but this how i feel

I wish it wasn’t real

I’ve known you for a short amount of time

but every time I see you, I wish you were mine

and I was yours,

Answer 1

Very heartfelt and sincere; excellent!

Answer 2

I think, it needs a little work, your on the right

track,it has good points, but there's a few

lines that could be left to the imagination,

keep at it, !!!

Answer 3

Yes this was a beautiful poem.You got some talent little lady! Get your poems published.

I write poetry,short stories,and essays and I am going to work to get them published.

Get your work published.