Poem???????comments please?

Question

To Whom I Can’t Have

It was my first day as a math teacher,

When I saw her.

She was a student with long brown hair.

She looked too mature for her age,

With sad green eyes,

She was the one I loved most,

But couldn’t have.

The whole year went by,

And I was just content to be near her,

My sad-eyed angel.

She’d smile at me sometimes,

But wouldn’t say a word.

I smiled back,

And I’d pretend I didn’t feel anything.

Then on the last day of school,

She came to me with a note.

It was in a white envelope,

With red flowers.

She said to call her back,

After I had read the entire note,

And then left without looking back.

opened it, and it went something like this:

“It was my first day of high school,

When I saw him

He was my math teacher,

He looked too handsome to be a teacher.

With chocolate brown eyes,

He was the one I loved most,

But couldn’t have.

The whole year went by,

And I was just content to be near him,

My beautiful teacher.

I’d smile at him sometimes,

But wouldn’t say a word.

He’d smiled back,

And I’d pretend I didn’t feel anything.

Then on the last day of school,

I wrote him a note.

It was in a white envelope,

With red flowers.

I wanted to tell him how I felt.

He’s the one I love most,

And I want him to call me back.”

Answer 1

kinda sick cuz a student and a teacher!?!?!

Answer 2

I like the poem...

but the story is alittle um.. sick?

Answer 3

i thought it was a so-so poem, but when the part comes to her letter and it says the same things, that part is really creative and i like it alot.

Answer 4

I'm not a writer nor do I read a lot of poetry, but I love the style it's very creative.

Answer 5

i love it...what happens?

Answer 6

I THINK THAT THIS POEM IS KIND OF WIERD. ARE YOU A HIGH SCHOOL MATH TEACHER????? AND IF U ARE THAT IS NOT COOL AT ALL!...........THAT WAS COOL HOW U REVERSED IT THOUGH!