Poem???good?

Question

this is not india

we are not asian

you like to say we were the first to arrive

can you not see this is were we alwaz reside

our trails have grown over

from lack of use

you took our children

to give them abuse

our names have changed

so its easy to say

we stood tall with open arms

now we drop to our knees to pray

Answer 1

it was ok, but not much depth to it

Answer 2

i like it

you should add more too :)

Answer 3

for the second time no mate. Not to be rude, but they are lacking some serious depth. Give us something to think about. Double meanings, metaphors. Thats what we like to see!

Answer 4

It is very touching. I really enjoyed it.