Poetry!!! Review and rate 1-10. What do you think of my poem?Please rate or review.?

Question

Inner stength

You are the subconscious being that whispers in my ear

That permeates the very cells throughout my body

You are the divine presence within my soul

You define my very character

You are the formidable force inside of me

That drives me to overcome obstacles

Too extreme and too daunting for mere mortals

You help me to continue, to push through adversity

You control my strengths and my weaknesses

You control my actions and my reactions

When I feel as though all is lost, you give me hope

And suddenly I am enlightened, I begin anew

Many a fool have blundered and have relied upon

Brute strength, brute force

Brute strength is temporary, but internal strength is everlasting

You are my inner strength, the beast within

My conscious is clear and I am ready

It is time for me to unleash you.

Answer 1

9/10

Very well-written. I like the first stanza very much. It's an inspiring poem and deserves definite praise!

Good luck, and keep writing :)

God bless,

Emily

Answer 2

9 1/2 it was good :]