Poetry (critique)?

Question

Pain and Anger rising up

Screaming Silence

Telling us who we are

Last one Standing

Holding onto nothing

Reach for understanding

Capturing the Meaning

Still know nothing

Intolerable Silence

Said Many Words

running out of words

Still said nothing

running out of tears

Speaking with silence

screaming with silence

emptiness crawls within

saying so much by saying nothing

just be silent

just be still

revel in the magic

meet the cold

Dip in the pool

of shallow super-ficial

killing off the supply

Deafining Silence

Releasing the impatience

Starving for attention

I hunger for love

the feeling of never

shine the light on the emptiness

Fill Me With Silence

Choking a smile

Paint me a pretty picture

of what it should have been

Devour me, Silence!

Just be Silent

Just be Still

Two Faced Nothings

Clouding the memory

Dive into the

Ocean black

hold my hand

close you eyes

The trust will keep you alive

eternal vow

a broken shame

kiss the bride

erupt in rage

blow me away silent wind

Answer 1

Generic angsty teen, very boring, nothing special to make the reader want to read the whole thing.