Poetry or lyricist? Here's a sample

Question

What are the best outlets for my creative nature? I like to write lyrics...but I'm a long way from singing well (Mayer and Matthews are my idols)

anyway, here's a peice of mine.

<u>Finding Home</u>

As we laid our feet on the bamboo floor

Veins of trees caramel-brown, blossoms of our chore

Fingers curl on the clove shaped twisting grip

Swing the hinge to reveal, silky whites moon-lit

Pouring in though the sills not dripping at all

Sets the mood for a dream, spills into the hall

With the breeze of the bay, curtains move out and in

Synchronize with the waves, of the gentile ocean

Not a house, just a home

Someday both, I will own

Not a house, just a home

Real as real, mind and soul

Copyright © 2008 Cody Maines

Answer 1

that&#039;s really good. I enjoyed it although i did find it easier to sing than recite