Poetry question?

Question

now as an up and coming poetrist, i am making a few poems. i have like 10, but the problem is, i am self concious about things i do. i need to know what people think of it. no i am not one of those poeple who live by there friends, and i don't write based on what other people think, i wright from the poetrist half of my brain. i just like comments, good or bad. for example, if i had two poems, and you said one was good and one was bad, and no reason, i would analyze the two poems and see if i messed up anywhere. now if you just don't like the style of the other one, then its like whatever. good or bad, i like commentary. i like to know, if anything, what i am doing wrong. uh-oh, i have rambled. anyway, my question is, do you know of any poetrist site that i can submit my work in to get comments?

one of my poems

Answer 1

This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 2

Intriguing...listen you aren't really going to be able to take peoples words into your poems because people like different stuff. I mean i like rhyming poetry but i have learned to appreciate free verse. You can't really make everyone happy so just leave it as it is, but if you really want  here are some sites: http://fmwriters.com and http://absolutewrite.com/forums/

www.poetry.com

http://www.fictionpress.com/

so there you go