Poets what is your take on this?

Question

Come Home My Child

Come home my child, come home where

you are known

come home where you belong and see want this house, make

you strong.

So want you just come home

because, here, is where you belong.

When you are gone, all the joy is gone!!

So for those of you who are alone and not at home

your presence is the key, to this house

so I say for the last time, come on home, it's where you belong.

Latwanuia Dishaun Henry

Answer 1

excellent I like it and it strikes a good emotional tone 10/10