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Pretty sure this is a luv-it-or-hate-it. YOU MUST LUV IT. I wrote it just for you. Do you understand?

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this poem is half way between here and somewhere, maybe a stepping stone only, between poems: hop scotch

the rose crystal

there’s an old man outside of town

follow the dusty road to his door

the gravel squeaks underfoot but

a simple stone called rose crystal

captures the sun

telling me there's a new paradigm

this perfect translucent hexagon

a prize for any collector but for me

only an omen a sign a mystery

so still the night come alive

an insect-driven manic throbbing

the skies you cannot see in the city

the universe is a backgammon game

each piece carefully laid into its place

hou hou do you know who speaks?

you're not from these parts

the retched and pitiless demons alight

no, no no just a common house cat

in a fit. you are a city boy

looming down and unsteady

like dough spread under the roller

wavering tip to tip and side to side

flaps down screaming and whistling

intensifying commanding deafening

the transport dancing down, but you know

that this will not consume you

it's coming in a bit further in boise

and a cah cha cha boom crackle

the cheaper the speakers the louder they play

don’t they?

beyond street lights this other world

to park the car anywhere but softly

there glares his houselights

like the eyes of our souls

like the jack-o-lantern’s dancing candle

what you know and what you seek

converge beyond the daily drumbeats

in the timelessness in this placelessness

where hearts unfold but you do not know

from whence they come

the old man reads the stones

he comes alive in them many stories

if i wanted science i have had it

and i am not without my fears

I am looking beyond myself because

i know one thing that is i lie hidden

to myself beyond my understanding

and masked behind many layers

and so much “to do about nothing”

secluded cold and intense

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  1. hey your poem is amazing...i loved it....you think verry deep...i really appreciate ur work...well done!! and keep up ur gr8 work


  2. wow i think it's great!

  3. Very intense very different, country poem about the differences between the city and country life--this was my interpretation of it!

    Good job !!! Cheers !!!

  4. That was amazing. I loved it. You have some deep thoughts dude.Keep writing, I want to read more!!!

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