Proofread on an essay about 'meaningful & acceptance in relationships'?

Question

In today’s society, there are several ways to maintain a meaningful relationship. Three out of many relationships that are accepted in today’s society are g*y marriages, social homogamy, and cohabitation.

Even though g*y marriages were not really accepted in the past. There has been a tremendous acceleration in the acknowledgment that g*y marriages are now being accepted and it’s just the fact that you have to be willing to be open and being honest when it comes to g*y marriages.

Social homogamy is now accepted in today’s society. It’s just easier to have a meaningful relationship when you happen to have either the same age, race, ethnic background, religion, socio-economic status, and political views. It’s easier to date someone who is similar to you then someone who’s different just because in the long run; If you’re too different, you end up running into too many conflicts which could jeopardize the relationship that you have then. --etcetc.

Answer 1

you don't know what a sentence is.  you have a lot of grammar problems like especially agreement.  you need to start with an outline and make your points.  this just seems run-on to me and doesn't make that much sense.  WHY is g*y marriage more accepted?  what are the factors? your spelling is good but writing is based on thinking and your thinking and organization needs work as well as grammar and construction.