Pros, Please rate my Yu-Gi-Oh Zombie World Deck?

Question

The release of Zombie world SD 15 is gonna make zombies tier 1.I planned this deck ahead of time.But i am still goin to get this deck when the SD comes out.I am on a budget so no il blud or goblin zombie.

Monsters - 20

2 Red Eyes Zombie Dragon

2 Black Knight of Dark Dragon

3 Mezuki

3 Zombie Master

3 Pyramid Turtle

2 Despair from the Dark

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Destiny Hero – Disk Commander

1 Morphing Jar

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Sangan

Spells - 16

3 Zombie World

3 Book of Life

2 Call of the Mummy

2 Card of Safe Return

2 Lightning Vortex

1 Brain Control

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

Traps - 4

2 Royal Decree

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Bottemless Traphole

Thanks rate 1-10 and give suggestions.

Answer 1

well i give it a 8/10 but i would get rid of disk commander because i think he is going to be banned. also add some ryu kokki because he is great in zombie decks.