Punctuation & grammar reference?

Question

please help me correct puncuation & grammar in following para

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Mr. Syed Ahmed Sabeeh has excellent working knowledge of Java with deep understanding of Java Remote Method Invocation (RMI), Java Secure Socket Extension (JSSE), Java Database Connectivity (JDBC), and Cryptography Extension (JCE) APIs. Also he demonstrated his extraordinary mathematical and analytical skills during his work on Mail Monitoring Server Core, dcipherMail, Email Screener & Email Archiver products which are part of our future email compliance product line

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Answer 1

Mr. Syed Ahmed Sabeeh has an excellent working knowledge of Java with a deep understanding of Java Remote Method Invocation (RMI), Java Secure Socket Extension (JSSE), Java Database Connectivity (JDBC), and Cryptography Extension (JCE) APIs.  Also, he demonstrated his extraordinary mathematical and analytical skills during his work on Mail Monitoring Server Core, dcipherMail, Email Screener & Email Archiver products, which are part of our future email compliance product line

Answer 2

I made only a few minor changes.  I wasn't sure if "dcipherMail" is misspelled ("d_e_cipherMail"?).

Mr. Syed Ahmed Sabeeh has an excellent working knowledge of Java as well as a deep understanding of Java Remote Method Invocation (RMI), Java Secure Socket Extension (JSSE), Java Database Connectivity (JDBC), and Cryptography Extension (JCE) APIs. He has also demonstrated extraordinary mathematical and analytical skills during his work on Mail Monitoring Server Core, dcipherMail, Email Screener & Email Archiver products, which are part of our future email compliance product line.