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I'm writing a novel, but the writing is really deep. Is it okay to have a lot of fragments in your book to add suspense?For example:"She grabbed my hand. Hard. There was no stopping her.""Hard" is not a sentence but it adds suspense to the story, right?Here's another one:"That also held onto me. If you believe. I did believe."Like, "If you believe" is not a sentence but it adds suspense to the story when it is a sentence. Right?
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