R my quotes good?

Question

1) when someone leaves you there's always a reason.

2)When you look in the mirror you only see the outsidde.

3)you cant die from a broken heart you only wish you could.

4)if you were a scab i'd pick you.

5) don't worry i talk to myself too.

6)when you're gone theres a hole where you should be and ill circle that hole till you come back.

7)if you could only make one more phone call who would you call and what would you say? and why are you waiting?

8) you are my flower in the winter.

9) your teardrop is my raindrop.

now dont be too harsh is they are stupid bc im only 12 soo....

if u rate tell if they are good that would be great and could you tell me which is ur fave?

Answer 1

Little girl, you are good!  I am a writer myself, and taught high school English.  You have talent and, apparently, an introspective soul, as well as "a way with words."  Keep it up and don't let anyone discourage you.  I'll be watching for more of your work.  Good luck and God bless you!

Answer 2

I really really love number one, two, three, four, five, and six.  Those ones just blow me away.  I just am so inspired by those and just feel so emotional when I read them.  I love them all but those six are just breath taking.

Answer 3

I love #3, I`d rate it a 9.9

and I`m not just saying that, I mean it

<3

:)

Answer 4

I love them! You Have obviously put a lot of thought into them. The first three are fantastic and so true. The last two re only too clever. I especially loves the one about you being my flower in the winter, I have never heard anything like that before. Very good

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