RATE/FIX MY ZOMBIE DECK???!!!

Question

need ideas for a yugioh zombie deck swarm. I already have some ideas and have a mill zombie but want to change i just want to know if i might have missed something.

I was thinking something like this

MONSTERS 22

x3 Mezuki

x3 Zombie Master

x3 Pyramid Turtle

x3 Goblin Zombie

x3 Mystic Tomato

x2 Ryu Kokki

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Morphing Jar

x1 Il Blud

x1 Card Trooper

MAGICS 15

x3 Book of Life

x2 Card of Safe Return

x1 Foolish Burial

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Call of the Mummy

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 MST

x1 Lighting Vortex

x1 Card Destruction

x1 Hand Destruction

x1 Veil of Darkness

x1 Smashing Ground

TRAPS 7

x1 Mirror Force

x3 Phoenix Wing Blast

x1 Ceasefire

x1 Transmigration Prophecy

x1 Magic Cylinder

Answer 1

8/10 my suggestion to you is take out card trooper, 1 card of safe return, 2 phoenix wing blast and take out a goblin zombie. Add 1 torrential tribute, an extra II bud, replace or add a shield crush with smashing ground. And add a premature burial.  

Answer 2

ZOMBIE SWARM DECK

TOTAL:41

MONSTERS:20

3 Zombie Master

3 Pyrimid Turtle

3 Mezuki

2 Goblin Zombie

2 Ryu Kokki

2 Giant Rat

1 Il Blud

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Sangan

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Morphing Jar

SPELLS:15

3 Book of Life

2 Card of Safe Return

2 Book of Moon

2 Enemy Controller

1 Heavy Storm

1 M.S.T.

1 Brain Control

1 Premature Burial

1 Monster Reborn

1 Smashing Ground

TRAPS:6

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

3 Solemn Judgement

1 Trap Dustshoot

SIDE DECK:15

1 Il Blud

1 Card Trooper

2 Kenetic Soldier

1 Goblin Zombie

2 Dust Tornado

2 The Shallow Grave

2 Pulling the Rug

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Phenix Wing Wind Blast