RATE and FIX my Harpie Lady (UPDATED) Deck?

Question

Monsters - 21

x2 Simorgh, Bird of Divinity

x1 Harpie Lady 1

x1 Harpie Lady 2

x1 Harpie Lady 3

x2 Harpie Lady Sisters

x1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

x1 Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon

x2 Birdface

x2 Flying Kamakiri #1

x2 Swift Birdman Joe

x1 Kazejin

x1 Lady Ninja Yae

x2 Harpie Queen

x2 Slate Warrior

magic - 13

x2 Elegant Egotist

x2 Triangle Ecstasy Spark

x2 Harpies' Hunting Ground

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Card Destruction

x1 Lightning Vortex

x1 Nobleman of Crossout

x1 Harpie's Feather Duster

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Swords of Revealing Light

traps - 8

x2 Icarus Attack

x1 Magic Jammer

x2 Sakuretsu Armor

x2 Hysteric Party

x1 Aqua Chorus

total - 42

Answer 1

Good combinations. Harpie's in general don't seem to be very strong, however, but I think you may have something going. so I would rate this a 7/10

Answer 2

good cards but noone uses them