Rainbow - One more poem for the kids?

Question

Perhaps for the early or pre-schoolers?

Rainbow New

I watched the rain shower

Pass me by

The sun peaked through

The cloudy sky

A bridge of colour

Before my eye

Created for me......a rainbow

I wondered then

What magic hand

Would spread this beauty

Across the land

For me to see

And try to understand

The creation that is......a rainbow

With every shower

It appears brand new

And brightens the world

For me and for you

A reminder to give thanks

To the painter who

Has created this gift..........a rainbow

Answer 1

Rainbows are a great way to explain about prisms.  Light courtesy of Mr. Sunshine who is quite a painter!

Answer 2

Nicely said.  The only drawback to me is the religious overtones.  In a public school setting, may present a problem.

Answer 3

Very nice.  I love the shower, and how the sun peaks through to create the rainbow.  Then the magic hand that spreads the beauty wider and wider.

Lovely.

T.