Rap about my father?

Question

Dad why did you have to f**k up my whole life

growing up watching you beat all your wife's

I wish i had a dollar everytime you pulled out a Knife

You and mom split up when i was five

After all i saw you do to her i couldn't belive she was alive

You always got mom not to snitch with a lil brive

You were always getting high

You always told me lies

You always told me the government wants us to die

I think you might have been true about that

but back to the point of how you were

You always told me to be a rebel

to take everything you do to the next level

You always told me to never trust a n***a

You told me that one day I would pull the trigga

You told me to stay a soulja

now i have been an anti government

now noticing that they're just an establishment

Anyway i hope you well

Tell me what it's like in h**l

Answer 1

some of the bars are a little choppy but you got a message and some rhymes and your getting better check out one about my mama http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 2

thats kinda sick

Answer 3

good sh*t my friend.

Answer 4

wow man thats deep and thats like the song kim by eminem!!!

EDIT:your welcome man we need more rap like that!!!

Answer 5

Yeah its iight dat last verse was tight...

"Anyway i hope you well Tell me what it's like in h**l"

i give it a 10 yeah you did good

Answer 6

7.5/10

Keep rapping.