Rate/Fix My Dark Magician Deck?

Question

Monsters: 19

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

2 Dark Magician

2 Dark Magician Girl

2 Skilled Dark Magician

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

3 Magical Exemplar

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Morphing Jar

2 Old-Vindictive Magician

1 Card Trooper

1 Marshmallon

1 Spirit Reaper

Spells: 14

2 Magical Dimension

2 Mage Power

1 Card Destruction

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Soul Exchange

1 Book of Moon

1 Swords of Revaling Light

Traps: 7

2 Dark Bribe

1 Magician's Circle

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

Answer 1

as a good idea, use apprentice magician and old vindictive together, its a great chain, and allows you to special summon an old vindictive in face down def, also you ccan summon another apprentice.

can also be of good use with magical dimension.

i dont think morphing jar, card destruction and card trooper are really needed, and cards such as a 2nd lightning vortex could come in more handy.. also consider using dark eradicator warlock..

Answer 2

Very good, 8/10. Only a few changes are needed:

Monsters: 18

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

2 Dark Magician

2 Dark Magician Girl

2 Skilled Dark Magician

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

3 Magical Exemplar

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Morphing Jar

2 Old-Vindictive Magician

1 Card Trooper

1 Marshmallon

Spells: 15

2 Magical Dimension

2 Mage Power

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Soul Exchange

1 Book of Moon

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Diffusion Wave-Motion

1 Dedication through Light and Darkness

Traps: 7

1 Dark Bribe

1 Magician's Circle

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Magic Jammer

Answer 3

Put more spellcasters and spellcaster support cards in it.

Answer 4

my personal experience you need more traps in it cuz if you played a deck like mine you would get wasted (no offense) but you lack traps that stop monsters from  attacking look me up and check out my deck list and the traps in it you will c y i say wat i do plus most spellcaster are dark so even the cards tht say it will only work on a dark monster should work nice with your deck too