Rate/Fix My Deck Please?

Question

Monsters: (20)

Chaos Command Magician

Dark Magician x2

Destiny Hero Dasher

Cybernetic Magician

Magical Marionette

Sangan

Gemini Elf

Apprentice Magician x2

Royal Magical Library

Skilled Dark Magician x2

Old Vindictive Magician x2

Dark Valkyria

Silent Magician Lv4

Marshmallon

Treeborn Frog

Neo Spacian Grand Mole

Spells: (16)

Creature Swap

Mage Power

Magical Dimension x2

Dark Magic Attack

Monster Reborn

Axe of Despair

Lighting Vortex

Premature Burial

Dark Magic Curtain

Swords of Revealing Light

Heavy Storm

Mystical Spce Typhoon

Soul Exchange

Scapegoat

Nobleman of Crossout

Traps: (5)

Magician's Circle

Mirror Wall

Magic Cylinder

Negate Attack

Seven Tools of the Bandit

I'm thiking about getting My Body as a Shield, Spell Economics, Cat Ear Tribe, Forced Back, Emergency Probitions, Morphing Jar, Prime Material Dragon, Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys and Fires of Doomsday and a Dark Emperor Structure Deck, Can't get DMOC/Gravekeeper's Spy though.

Answer 1

8/10

-1 Dark Valkyrie

-1 Treeborn Frog

+2 Magician's Valkyrie

Answer 2

-1 dark valkyia

+2 magicians valkyia

-1 old vindictive magician

-Seven Tools of the Bandit

+1 sakuretsu armor

hope that helps

Answer 3

Monsters: 20

2 Dark Magician

1 Cybernetic Magician

1 Destiny Hero - Dasher

2 Skilled Dark Magician

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

3 Magical Exemplar

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Sangan

1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

1 Morphing Jar

2 Old Vindictive Magician

2 Apprentice Magician

1 Marshmallon

Spells: 14

2 Magical Dimension

2 Mage Power

1 Dark Magic Attack

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Soul Exchange

1 Nobleman of Crossout

1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps: 6

1 Magician's Circle

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Dimensional Prison / Sakuretsu Armor

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

Total: 40 cards