Rate/Fix My Yu-Gi-Oh! Monarch deck?

Question

Can someone please help me with my marco/ monarch?

Monsters: 20

Granmarg The Rock Monarch x2

Mobius The Frost Monarch x2

Raiza The Storm Monarch x2

Zaborg The Thunder Monarch x2

D.D Warrior Lady x1

D.D Survivor x3

D.D Assilant x2

D.D Scout Plane x2

D.D Warrior x3

Cauis The Shadow Monarch x1

Spells:10

Dimensional Fissure x1

Soul Absorbtion x3

MST x1

Premature Burial x1

Swords Of R. Light x1

Giant Trunade x1

Monster Reborn x1

Reinforcement Of The Army x2

Traps: 10

Macro Cosmos x3

Mirrior Force x1

Sakurastu Armor x3

Magic Cylinder x1

Royal Decree x2

Total 40 cards and please no ofensive comments

Answer 1

raiza is at one dude onkly allowed 1 rasiza the storm monarch

so do this

- 2 grangmarg

- 1 raiza

- 1 mobius

+ 2 caius

+ 2 thestalos

- 2 dd warrior

+ 2 legendarry jujitsu master

also

- 2 soul absorption

+ 2 dim fissure

- 1 macro

- 2 royal decree

- 3 sak armor

+ 2 bottomless trpa hole

+ 3 solemn judgment

+ 1 torrential tribute