Rate/Fix my Dark Nephthys Yugioh Deck?

Question

3 Dark Nephthys (think i spelt it correctly yay)

2 jinzo

3 retarded jin (jinzo -returner)

2 newdoria

2 dark crusader

2 destiny hero dasher

2 destiny hero fear monger

1 promethues,king of shadows

3 destiny hero dogma

3 reasoning

1 monster reborn

1 premature burial

1 mystical space typhoon

1 heavy storm

1 card destruction

2 trade-in

1 brain control

1 smashing ground

1 lightning vortex

1 torrential tribute

2 sakuretsu armor (too poor for mirror force)

2 raigeki break

SPAMMERS AND FLAMERS WILL BE REPORTED!!!!!

Answer 1

its me again - grb.

I just wanna say that in last omment: wll = well, 1 or ... solemns - meaning 2

I'd also like to update with some more traps: mirror force and shift and if there is any space left one dark spirit of the silent.
          
                      grb - Ultimo Mahimo DragonAura Desvastation - Destruction

Answer 2

i agree at some points and disagree on others.

Firstly dark magician of chaos is banned - you can use him only in friendlies and you can only have 1 reasoning - [limited].

I also think you need some more traps. Get 1 or solemn judgments and 1 dark bribe.
If you get to the desicion to have 2 solemns then dont get dark bribe.
Also, magic cylinder would work, and go and check these as wll and make your decisions... karma cut, bottomless trap hole, negate attack and kunai with chain [yes kunai with chain - tdgs -- useful effect since you do not have any other equips -- it's 2 in 1 card]

In everything else i agree with the guy which commented.

                                                    grb - Dragonaura Desvastation and Destruction

Answer 3

i agree at some points and disagree on others.

Firstly dark magician of chaos is banned - you can use him only in friendlies and you can only have 1 reasoning - [limited].

I also think you need some more traps. Get 1 or solemn judgments and 1 dark bribe.
If you get to the desicion to have 2 solemns then dont get dark bribe.
Also, magic cylinder would work, and go and check these as wll and make your decisions... karma cut, bottomless trap hole, negate attack and kunai with chain [yes kunai with chain - tdgs -- useful effect since you do not have any other equips -- it's 2 in 1 card]

In everything else i agree with the guy which commented.

                                                    grb - Dragonaura Desvastation and Destruction