Rate/Fix my Dark World Deck?

Question

Please Rate/Fix as you see fit...

Cards - 44

Monsters -

3 BROWW, HUNTSMAN OF DARK WORLD

2 BRRON, MAD KING OF DARK WORLD

3 GOLDD, WU-LORD OF DARK WORLD

1 GREN, TACTICIAN OF DARK WORLD

2 KAHKKI, GUERILLA OF DARK WORLD

1 SCARR, SCOUT OF DARK WORLD

3 SILLVA, WARLORD OF DARK WORLD

1 DARK RULER HA DES

1 MORPHING JAR

1 SANGAN

1 SNIPE HUNTER

Magic -

2 DARK WORLD LIGHTNING

3 DARK WORLD DEALINGS

1 LIGHTNING VORTEX

1 MYSTICAL SPACE TYPHOON

1 POT OF AVARICE

1 CARD DESTRUCTION

2 CARD OF SAFE RETURN

2 GATEWAY TO DARK WORLD

1 HEAVY STORM

2 THE CHEERFUL COFFIN

Traps -

2 PHOENIX WING WIND BLAST

1 WIDESPREAD RUIN

2 APPROPRIATE

1 DARK DEAL

1 FORCED REQUISITION

1THE FORCES OF DARKNESS

So, yeah, that's it. Please rate or - or + any cards.

Answer 1

Its funny I only counted 42 cards and you said there's 44...

anyways good build and I'll give it a 8/10

I would +1 Gren and -1 Kahkki, because proper removal of spell/traps could lead you to direct attacks without worrying for things like magic cylinder and mirror force.

Removal of monsters is really not as important, because your special summoned Sillva and Goldd could attack over most monsters. that's really what this deck is all about. therefore

-1 lightning vortex and +1 Hand destruction

(remember that the darkworld monsters will miss their timing if discarded as a cost for an effect >>Lightning vortex<<)

In this deck drawing the right card is essential, so

-1 Widespread ruin

-1 Dark Deal

Now your deck has 40 cards!!

Finally, Forced Requisition is a great card in this deck, totally spoiling your opponent's every plan.

-1 gateway to dark world (you cant special summon OR normal summon for a turn?!?)

-1 Phoenix wing wind blast (if ur gonna kill it with forced requisition, why with Phoenix?!?)

+2 Forced requisition

THats it for now. I hope this has helped.

Answer 2

have you heard of fine.. lol, its a trap card that says "discard 2 cards"

this can special summon 2 goldd's in your opponants turn, which is always great.

also you want to use night assailant, this will help you recycle your morphing jar, as you can return morphing jar to your hand using night assailants effect.