Rate/Fix my Macro Monarch Deck?

Question

Here's the build:

Monsters:

3 Caius the Shadow Monarch

1 Jinzo/Prime Material Dragon

1 Jinzo/Kuraz the Light Monarch

2 Cyber Dragon

3 D.D. Survivor

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Exiled Force

2 D.D. Scout Plane

1 Marshmallon

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

Spells:

3 Dimensional Fissure

2 Allure of Darkness

1 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Brain Control

1 Soul Exchange

Traps:

3 Macro Cosmos

1 Return from the Different Dimension

2 Sakuretsu Armor

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Mirror Force

1 Karma Cut

1 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Escape from the Dark Dimension

Total: 42 cards

Answer 1

3 Caius

1 Raiza

1 Mobius

1 Thestalos

2 Cyber dragons

3 dd Survivors

2 dd Scout Planes

1 dd Warrior Lady

1 Snipe hunter

1 Grand Mole

2 Cyber Valleys

1 Marshmallon

1 Spirit reaper

1 Morfhing Jar

3 Dimensional fissure

2 Reinforcment of the army

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Heavy storm

1 Nobleman

2 Allure of darkness

1 Lighting Vortrex

1 Brain control

2 Macro cosmos

2 Solemn Judgment

1 Bottomless

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute