Rate/Fix my New Yugioh Deck 1-10?

Question

3 caius the shadow monarch

2 jinzo

1 mobius the frost monarch

3 gravekeepers spy

2 gravekeepers guard

2 gravekeepers assailant

2 gravekeepers spear soldier

2 gravekeepers commandmant

1 marshmallon

1 spirit reaper

2 arcana force 0-the fool

1 smashing ground

1 terraforming

3 necrovalley

1 mystical space typhoon

1 heavy storm

1 lightning vortex

1 monster reborn

1 brain control

2 fires of doomsday

2 raigeki break

1 torrential tribute

2 magicains cricle

1 trap dustshoot

3 rite of spirit

SPAMMERS AND FLAMERS WILL BE REPORTED!!!

HONEST ANSWERS ONLY

Also:fools rulings state that it cannont be changed to defense mode so if it's attacked it wil flip in defence already so its just like a marshmallon

Answer 1

its quite a good deck but make sure you have all elements and dont rely on  just one i should know i relyd on mainly the light element and i lost all my games but then i changed my deck so i had a mixed one and i won so many it was awesome but your deck is really good and im not lying just remember that dont cheat in any of your games instead of making your opponent look silly you could end up making yourself look silly.

Answer 2

i like it no complaits here 9/10

Answer 3

looks good ... never noticed that with fool ... am gunna try dat in my deck =P lol ... your deck looks very good ... with 2 jinzo you may wanna take out a few traps ... i would suggest taking out 2/3 (1 rite of spirit, 1/2 magicians circle would be my suggestions) ... hope this helps

Answer 4

( 7.9 out of 10 )

Good deck bro, and it's better to focus one one or two types in a deck. If you use to many, you have less chance using your best combos, unless you build your deck around it.

Grat combos, like you could have an unbeatible defense with Marshmallon, Spirit Reaper and Arcana Force-The Fool on your feild.

Answer 5

-2 raigeki break (that's a lot of traps with jinzo)

+1 gravekeeper's commandant

8/10

Answer 6

Hellllllloooooooooooo?????!!!!!

Some of your cards are Forbidden, can't you see?

Forbidden means Prohibited!!!

But good Deck!

Try to Balance your deck by removing cards you don't really need....

^^

Answer 7

LOL! =D there's NOTHING FORBIDDEN IN THIS DECK!

looks good but theres too many traps in here for 2 jinzos.

replace heavy for trunade, i wouldn't risk losing my necrovalley's in this deck, plus, theres too many traps for a heavy, you'd probably end up losing your traps that might save you or not even using heavy because you have necrovalley on the field with your key traps. eventually, you WILL NEED A MIRROR FORCE.You could live without but the EVENTUALLY thing makes that impossible to do.