Rate/ Fix my dark deck?

Question

Monsters- 19

1x Darklord Zerato

2x Belial marquis of Darkness

1x Jinzo

1x DMoc

2x Armageddon knight

2x Dark grepher

1x Snipe hunter

1x Spirit reaper

1x Morphing Jar

2x Mystic Tomatos

2x Obsidian dragons

1x Brain Jacker

1x d.d Warrior lady

1x Kycoo

Spells- 15

1x Lightning vortex

1x Heavy storm

1x Enemy controller

1x Mystical space typhoon

2x allure of darkness

3x fires of doomsday

1x bait doll

1x pot of avarice

1x monster reborn

1x swords of revealing light

1x premature burial

1x book of moon

Traps- 6

2x waboku

1x mirror force

1x sakuretsu

1x bottomless traphole

1x torrential tribute

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total= 40

This is my current deck. I dont want to focus on dad as everyone else is I want to focus more on belial and zerato

so please rate/ fix my deck and tell me your opinions

Answer 1

whoa cool... i have idea for one trap card, listen this: mystical potato head groove thing

Answer 2

They all sound wonderful!

Answer 3

actualy no one cares about dark decks no more its all about the

gladitor beast

Answer 4

not bad

8.5/10

Answer 5

Not bad 7.5/10 i think you should take out waboku for magic cylinder, there is no point in book of moon because if spirit reaper is effected by a card effect it is destroyed, take out bait doll and swords of reavealing light and premature burial, put in dark explotion, escap from the dark dimention, and solemn judgment. Put in one more armageddon knight. Put in brain control, take out brain jacker, kykoo, and dd warrior lady, play 3 Dark Crusaders, and try to get dark armmed dragon or the dark creator.

Answer 6

Id say take out a Waboku and put in Magic Cylinder