Rate/Fix my improved Deck? (yugioh)?

Question

This deck may not have good attacking monsters but the hole deck lets me draw my opponent out before me and clears the field quickly.

total cards-50

monsters-24

x1 exxod master of the guard

x1 hieracosphinx

x2 criosphinx

x2 guardian sphinx

x1 grand mole

x3 golem sentry

x3 guardian statue

x3 medusa worm

x3 needle worm

x2 gigantes

x2 giant rat

x1 sangan

spells-12

x2 magical mallet

x2 soul exchange

x1 brain control

x1 premature burial

x1 the shallow grave

x1 monster reborn

x1 lightning vortex

x1 giant trunade

x1 mst (mystical space typhoon)

x1 swords of revealing light

traps-14

x1 drastic drop off

x3 negate attack

x3 sakuretsu armor

x1 magic cylinder

x1 waboku

x1 release from stone

x1 non aggresion area

x1 seven tools of the bandit

x1 trap jammer

x1 magic jammer

Answer 1

6/10. Too many cards. This build has less cards.

Deck: 42

monsters 22

x1 Exxod Master of the Guard

x1 Hieracosphinx

x2 Criosphinx

x2 Guardian Sphinx

x3 Golem Sentry

x3 Guardian Statue

x3 Medusa Worm

x3 Needle Worm

x2 Giant Rat

x1 Sangan

x1 Neo-Spacian Grandmole

Spells 12

x1 Premature Burial

x1 The Shallow Grave

x1 Monster Reborn

x3 Lightning Vortex

x1 Giant Trunade

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 The Dark Door

x1 Level Limit Area B

x1 Messenger of Peace

x1 Pot of Avarice

Traps 8

x3 Drastic Dropoff

x3 Bottomless Trap Hole

x2 Ordeal of the Traveler/Begone Knave

x1 Gravity Bind

Answer 2

TOO MANY CARDS!!! AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

5/10 you gotta take out like 5 or 6 cards. also monster reborn is banned sorry

Answer 4

First of all, im sorry to say, needle worm is a limited card, only one is allowed in traditional play. with that said, im not seeing much of a point for the sangan, and since all good decks operate best with fewer cards, we should try to cut yours to 40 if possible. the counter traps are essential, but for a rock deck, im disappointed im not seeing chorus of sanctuary on the list. im building something similar to this at the moment, and mine looks more like

Criosphinx

Guardian Sphinx

Giant Soldier of Stone

Stone Statue of the Aztecs

Giant Rat

Megarock Dragon

Etc.

Also, Destruction Punch or Continuous Destruction Punch is just as essential as Chorus of Sanctuary. Im not going to give you a deck list because building should come from the heart and mind. But i hope my pointers were helpful!

Answer 5

lets see: Slightly too many cards.... some are banned... some are no good... Okay. Got it.

Deck: 45

Monsters: (21)

x1 Exodd, Master of the Guard

x2 Guardian Sphinx

x2 Hierosphinx

x3 Cieroshinx

x1 Sangan

x1 Grand Mole

x3 Golem Sentry

x3  Needle Worm

x2 Gigantes

x2 Giant Rat

Magic: (16)

x2 Soul Exchange

x1 Monster Reborn

x2 Shallow Grave

x2 Lightning Vortex

x1 Swords

x1 MST

x1 Heavy Storm

x3 Shield/Sword

x3 Gravekeeper's Servant

Trap: (9)

x2 Drastic Drop off

x2 Negate Attack

x1 Sakuretsu Armor

x2 Waboku

x2 Dark Bribe

Okay. As you can see, this deck follows the same sort of idea, but the card count is slightly more rounded and you have lost some cards that were most likely slowing down the deck. Traps first (its a luck thing): You need 2-3 drastic drop-off for the mill-strategy, and we dropped trap, magic, and seven tools for 2 bribe, also good for milling. Down to 2 negate attack and 1 sack; you won't need so much defense with such high monster DEF... x2 woboku make the cut because of their ability to stop your monsters being destroyed... thats pretty much it.

For spells, x2 lightning is nescessary because if your opponent pulls a beater with huge ATK you're skewed. MST AND heavy are needed in EVERY deck, but no Premy as you will rarely want your monsters in attack position. Magical mallet isn't that good... at it if you like, i don't really care.. it'll bring the card count back up, though. x2 soul exchange for all your high-level cards...thats all. oh, and 1 more shallow grave to get another monster out in your favoured position.

Now here comes the real toughy: the monsters. For a deck like this that focusses on DEF, you want mainly high DEF monsters. Now you have added mill, which complicates things, but not to much. x3 Needle worm stays, it is a staple in ANY deck w/mill. x3 cierosphinx, can be Special summoned by Giant Rat. Remove medusa worm and Gaurdian statue, and that should be better.

the only problem is the high number of tributes... that should be solvable, but it is needed to get exodd out. Figure out the rest yourself- i'm hungry for some burgers.