Rate/Fix my tournament deck?

Question

Hey this is it... i would like fixes more than rates but both are kl. The problem is that although the build LOOKS ok (i think it does) it draws some really c**p hands... help please!!!!

x2 Caius the shadow monarch

x2 Prime Material Dragon

x2 Thestalos the firestorm monarch

x1 Raiza the storm monarch

x2 Legendary jujitsu master

x2 dd crow

x2 Mask of Darkness

x1 Mole

x1 Card Trooper

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Sangan

x1 Morphing Jar

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 MST

x2 Soul exchange

x1 Brain Control

x2 Book of moon

x3 Solemn judgement

x3 Royal Oppression

x1 Dark Bribe

x3 Threatening Roar

x2 Bottomless trap hole

x1 Mirror Force

x1 Trap Dustshoot

Answer 1

Hello. Other than adding maybe a couple of Cyber Dragons (drop Jujitsu Master for these, you'll need the Dragons for tribute food) the Deck looks very solid and consistent. Also, try putting in 2-3 Dekoichis for some Draw power.  

Hope my advice helps, and Best of Luck in the tourney!!!

Answer 2

this is like my deck except i run dark armed dragon into mine check out my deck and comment and rat it and answer my question

i would take out the dark bribe and and one roar for gravekeepers spy but i like this deck 8 out of 10

Answer 3

Hmm... I'd give it an 8/10

-3 Threatening Roar

-2 Mask of Darkness

+1 Torrential Tribute

+1 Marshmallon

+2 Soul Exchange

+1 Treeborn Frog

I would likely do something with Crush Card Virus, but it's likely to be banned next month.  

Answer 4

This is an ok oppresion but try this:Total: 43

MONSTERS:21

2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

2 Prime Material Dragon

2 Vanitys Fiend

2 Green Gadget

2 Yellow Gadget

2 Red Gadget

3 Fossil Dyna Pachecephalo

2 D.D.Crow

1 Grand Mole

1 Card Trooper

1 Sangan

1 Morphing Jar

SPELLS:10

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Heavy Storm

1 M.S.T.

1 Brain Conrtrol

1 Smashing Ground

2 Soul Exchange

2 Book of Moon

TRAPS:11

3 Solemn Judgement

3 Royal Oppression

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Trap Dustshoot

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Drark Bribe dosent work exept in counter fairy. Side deck Threatning roars.Side Deck everything else I took Out maybe some more crows, kenetic soldier stuff that combats the popular decks.

Answer 5

well, I see a lot of defensive.

-dark bribe

-3threatening roar

+bottomless

+soul exchange

+marshmallow

+torrential tribute

I'd also take out masks and put in gravekeeper spy and guard and then

add a CCV, but seeing it'll be banned soon, it's not worth it.



  

Answer 6

Monsters (20)

3x Kuraz

3x Caius

3x Giant Germ

2x Ryko, Lightsworn Hunter

2x Skelengel

1x Snipe Hunter

1x Marshmallon

1x Jinzo

1x Morphing Jar

1x Treeborn Frog

1x Cyber Dragon

1x Des Wombat

Spells (14)

2x Creature Swap

1x Soul Exchange

1x Premat

1x Soul Release

1x Book of Moon

1x Brain Control

1x Fires of Doomsday

1x Monster Reborn

1x Heavy Storm

1x MST

1x SORL

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Shallow Grave

Traps (6)

1x Return from the Different Dimension

1x Jar of Greed

1x Destruction Jammer

1x Mirror Force

1x Solemn Judgment

1x Greed