Rate/Fix my useless yugioh deck...?

Question

Monsters...

Lava Golem x2

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV4

Solar Flare Dragon x3

DESTINY HERO - DEFENDER x2

DES WOMBAT x2

DES KOALA x3

MARSHMALLON

SPIRIT REAPER

GIANT GERM x3

MORPHING JAR

Spells...

DARK SNAKE SYNDROME

MIST BODY

CARD DESTRUCTION

LIGHTNING VORTEX

MYSTICAL SPACE TYPHOON

HEAVY STORM

WAVE-MOTION CANNON x2

Traps...

SECRET BARREL x2

JUST DESSERTS

THE GIFT OF GREED x3

GREED

MIRROR FORCE

SAKURETSU ARMOR x2

TORRENTIAL TRIBUTE

Answer 1

Hey man I noticed nobody has posted an answer yet so let me give it a shot. Well first off I run a burn deck for fun and this deck seems pretty decent. The first problem I see is no defense, you're going to give them lava golem and yet you have no Level Limit Area B? No Gravity Bind? I see your strategy with the Secret Barrel's and Destiny Hero defender / Gift of greed, but to be honest its just not worth it at all. You're giving your opponent too many cards with no way to stop them. The Horus also seems a bit too hard to pull off effectively in this deck. Iet me post a decklist of what I think would really help you out a lot.

Monsters:

x2 Lava Golem

x3 Volcanic Slicer

x2 Des Wombat

x3 Stealth Bird

x3 Giant Germ

x1 Marshmallon

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Sangan

x2 Des Koala

x1 Gear Golem the Moving Fortress

Spell: 11

x3 Wave Motion Cannon

x1 Level Limit Area B

x1 Swords of Revieling Light

x1 Dark Snake Syndrome

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 The Dark Door

x1 Heavy Storn

x1 Dark Room of Nightmare

x1 Monster Reborn

Traps: 10

x3 Nightmare Wheel

x1 Magic Cylinder

x1 Gravity Bind

x1 Torrential Tribute

x1 Mirror Force

x3 Judgement of Anubis

I think this decklist would work a lot better because it utilizes more deadly life point draining methods (x3 Nightmare Wheel, x3 Wave Motion Cannon, x3 Volcanic Slicer, Dark Snake Syndrome) along with a few other little additions such as Magic Cylinder and Des Koala. The fact that this decklist provides defense via Gravity Bind and Level Limit Area B as well as Swords and even Nightmare Wheel. This way stealth birds can get flipped each turn knocking away life points in increments of 1000, convenient for finishing them with wave motion cannon.

overall I just think this deck would run more consistent, and your old deck relied to heavily on des koala and secret barrel, because your deck just pumped up there hand so you could use one of those effects. I think if you keep up a defense like Graviy Bind, they will get plenty of cards in there hand by themselves for Des Koala. The Gear Golem was added because not only does he have 2200 def, enough to stop a cyber dragon dead in its tracks, but you can sak 800 of your lp to attack directly, with 800. If you would prefer, you could switch it out with a 3rd Des or even a Subarineroid.