Rate/Fix revised Macro Deck?

Question

I've made several adjustments to this deck in order to make it tournament worthy. I have a feeling it could be better.

Monster: 20x

Caius the Shadow Monarch [3]

Cyber Valley [3]

D.D. Assailant [1]

D.D. Scout Plane [2]

D.D. Survivor [3]

D.D. Warrior [2]

D.D. Warrior Lady [1]

Dark Magician of Chaos [1]

Gren Maju Da Eiza [2]

Mobius the Frost Monarch [1]

Morphing Jar [1]

Spell: 14x

Brain Control [1]

D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation [3]

Dimensional Fissure [2]

Enemy Controller [2]

Lightning Vortex [1]

Mystical Space Typhoon [1]

Reinforcement of the Army [2]

Soul Absorption [2]

Trap: 10x

Bottomless Trap Hole [2]

Divine Wrath [1]

Interdimensional Matter Transporter [1]

Macro Cosmos [3]

Negate Attack [1]

Return from the Different Dimension [1]

Torrential Tribute [1]

Answer 1

nice deck, my only other recommendation is the three forms of helios which aren't necessary but cant give a free tributable monster when you get at least Helios the primordial sun through macro cosmos, also consider use of Bazoo the soul eater, Chaosrider Gustaph, and Golden Homunculus

Answer 2

9/10

You need to run 3 dimensional fissures. They are even better than Macros cosmos, as you can activate them the turn you draw them.

Take out soul absorbtion. When your in a tournament, fighting in the big leagues, life points are nothing. All that matters is your decks consistancy, ability to control the field, and power.

Take out Gren Maju Da Eiza. He is way to situational. You NEVER want a dead draw, which he will be.

Consider allure of darkness, it is great if you add dark cards, and if you use DD scout plane with it, he comes out in the end phase.(sadly it doesnt work with survivor)