Rate Fix this deck please? Yugioh?

Question

I'm back with another deck I made - This one I call Normal/Dark Turbo

Normal-Dark Turbo – 42 cards

Monsters 20

3 Dark Armed Dragon

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

1 Darklord Zerato

3 Cosmo Queen

3 Archfiend Soldier

3 Mad Dog of Darkness

2 Vorse Raider

3 D.D. Crow

1 Sangan

Spells 16

2 Veil of Darkness

3 Heart of the Underdog

2 Allure of Darkness

3 Trade In

2 D.D.R.

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

2 Swing of Memories

Traps 6

2 Common Charity

1 Crush Card Virus

3 Solemn Judgment

Answer 1

this looks like a good deck. 9.9/10 you have a very high chance of winning at my local tournament shop.

Answer 2

Very Very Very!!! BAD! JK.... Its really good.

You need to add 1 Mirrior Force

And Take out 1 Solemn Judgment

10/10

Answer 3

u could add "the dark creator" to let u summon ur monsters from ur grave, and also use "burial from a different dimension" so that u can get back the monsters u lost