Rate My Exodia Deck

Question

Ok Umm i wont have full exodia until next week but the rest of cards i have plz rate my deck and make suggestions.

Monsters x13

Exodia The Forbidden One

Right Arm

Right Leg

Left Arm

Left Leg

3x Sangan

DD assailiant

3x DD Warrior Lady

Mobius The Frost Monarch

Spells x11

2x Upstart Goblin

Monster Reborn

Mst

3x Heavy Storm

3x Magical Mallet

Brain Control

Traps x 16

3x Legacy Of Yata Garasu

3x Jar Of Greed

3x Sakeretsu Armor

2x Compulsory Evacuation Device

Draining Shield

Negate Attack

Conscription

2x Reckless Greed

Answer 1

I think Exodia decks are silly, why can't people win WITH HARD WORK AND STRATEGY!

Answer 2

take out mobius and put in spirit reaper x2

add marshmallon

add penguin soldier

take out 2 legacy of yata garasu, draining shield, conscription

add mirror force, threatning raor, magic cylinder

add premature burial

take out 2 heavy storms (its limited to 1)

add lightnig vortex

Answer 3

does your deck follow the bann list in any way??? go to upperdeckintertainment.com and go to yugioh and check out teh ban list to know your are running an illigal deck... any way strate to the point. you need 1 morphing jar, 1 more reckless greed, 3 hand destruction, 1 card destruction, 1 marshmallon, 1 spirit reaper, and cards like 3 masked dragons, and 3 troop dragons and 3 UFO turtles to start off the chain. anyway also have 3 nimbel momongas and 3 giant germ to get out un wanted cards, also have less traps... if i wew to remake this deck, it would look like this:

monsters: 30

3 ufo turtle

3 masked dragon

3 troop dragon

3 giant germ

3 nimbel momonga

5 parts of exodia

1 sangan

3 emmitions of the after life

3 apprentice magician

1 marshmallon

1 spirit reaper

1 morphing jar

spells: 7

3 hand destruction

1 card destruction

3 monster reincarnation

traps: 3

3 reckless greed