Rate My Lyrics 1-10?

Question

Since everyone seemed to respond to that fake dude postin Canibus lyrics, ill post my lyrics that are knowledge based like lots of Canibus tracks. Rate 1-10 like usual and BLAH BLAH BLAH

I'ma tell you what the grand plan is

it dates all the way back to Atlantis

But Atlantis isn't the real name though it was made up by Plato

they use symbolism to divide the blind on the grind and plant it even on the black campus

I can smell it like a scratch sniff they snatch kids for they s*x rings and sacrifice them to their dead kings

sh*ts serious the popes cloak is modeled after the hieroglyph for Sirius where the Illuminati sits steering us

I unlocked the holy see to realize the divine in me which they make a crime to be

His stories lying and the signs thin

the Aryans were the Assyrians who built the Giza Pyramids to align in with Orion

they dug the caves in Himalayas and wrote the Vedas

Noah's arc was a Stargate that points to the dark lake

there was never a boat that parts fake

our third eye's a birds eye that can part lakes

we can see where the world lies with the sharks and snakes

Answer 1

I like how you use Multis.  

Answer 2

-4, it's not good, sorry

Answer 3

keep doing ya thing man. u got that canibus style and the things u say are over a lot of people's heads.  work hard and get in the rap game, we need more rappers like you out there

Answer 4

  -10 ...

Answer 5

You have some dope references.  I can tell you listen to JMT.

Edit: These people ripping on you are just trying to be cool, they don't know what they are talking about.

Answer 6

I'm sorta feeling it. You have lots of great work that I've seen. This one wasn't your best, but still 8/10.

If you are a really great lyricist, you shoulda participated in the BRA tournament. I'm in the finals.

Answer 7

it's ok  

Answer 8

Its alright. Not really feeling what your talking about and I got a little lost.

Answer 9

this is really dope 7 out of 10 .... you really got the feel of canibus in your music but I hate that canibus always uses single syllable  rhymes but when he uses multies I think hes is one of the best emcees I ever heard . like canibus you too use single syllable but you also use multis too but I think most of the song should have multies not only small parts . ..... I am really obsessed with multie and try to over use them like 3 - 4 words rhyming in two or three sentences . not to get me wrong canibus is one of the dopest emcees I know about he really has a unique style .

(is there a way I can talk to you privately I really want to share my meterial with you)

Answer 10

Sucks.

Answer 11

eh 7 or 8. But I liked it.