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Rate My Lyrics 1-10....?

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Same thing, rate and constructive criticize. I hope im not annoying from posting so much :\

Blind Eyes View Faces With Deaf Ears, So Evident

Mind of Gates..My Heavenly Mentality Appears So Celibate

My Tears Hold h**l In It....So When I Hold Them Back

You Visualize The Fire In My Eyes..My Soul Infact

I Know My Facts...I Also Know Not My Pinnacle

So When U Quiz Me...I Find It Quite Trivial

Like Intervals On A Spinnin Wheel...I've Yet To See

Somebody Try Me Twice....No Double Jeopardy

Dont Pick My Brain When My Combination Is Of Ali Wit His Disease

Sporadic And Unpredictable Many Needless Tendencies

So For The Crack I'll Have To Reincarnate Not In This Lifetime

No Rendition Of Addicted Poets Probably Like Mine

My steps Are Off Beat..Cant Dance On Graves Without A Sole

No Progression By Foot Without A Goal

Maybe I'll Be 'ole You...The Same Rhyme Scheme

Pierce Dark like High beams, Scales Not Matched like tri-beams

I Mean I Seem To Ramble But It All Ties In

Packing Suits In Boxes For tomorrow I Sin

The flow may seem confusing but trust me it works :P

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  1. 8+  Thanks, I can use this on my next rap album.


  2. 6 3/4 out of 10

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