Rate My Poem!?

Question

1-10 tell me what u think of my poem!

I acted mean

I acted deep

And In the act

U followed me

I wanted 2 know

What u would think

If i died

in my sleep

I kinda didn't

want to know

I didn't really

Let it show

But u had

read my mind

And followed me

one last time

I could here you

I could see

All that u

had to scream

A cry for help

A cry of pain

a cry to know

You went insane

You killed yourself

In suicide

With no love

And with no pride

Answer 1

8 prtty intersting

Answer 2

that's amazing.. you wrote a really good poem.. definitely keep writing.. this poem deeply expresses your thoughts on someone who died.. its insanely good.. great job.. :)

Answer 3

hmm .

ilike .

but just a little tip !

poems dont have to ryme .

:]]

but its good other than that .

Answer 4

9.

It really sounds like it'd be a great song! (Thinking Blue Octber-ish)

Sounds painful.

Answer 5

10

Answer 6

Beautiful :]

Star

- Jordan Sky

Answer 7

i loved it! ur really talented! 10! :)

Answer 8

10

it was beautiful, was it written about somebody??

Answer 9

It needs some work and you need to spell out the words and numbers--Some of the sentences do not flow as they should--

6

Answer 10

make it rhyme more and less insane and it might be better 6/10

Answer 11

not gonna lie i dont really like it. brush up on the vocab. use bigger words.

Answer 12

good but substitute too for 2