Rate My Yugioh Deck PLEase!!!?

Question

Monsters 21:

The Dark Creator

Darklord Zerato

Dark Nephtys

Great Maju Garzett

Sakues Samurai #4

Sillva warlord of the dark world

Legendary fiend

Obsidian dragon

Gravekepper's spy (3)

Archfiend soldier

Kuribo

Doomsday Horror

Sangan

Dark Crusader (2)

Mystic Tomato

Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

Spirit Reaper

Neo-spacian Grand Mole

Magic 12:

Monster Reincarnation

Nobleman of Crossout

Dark Eruption (2)

Lightning Vortex

Fires of Doomsday

Mage power

Heavy Storm

Dark world Gimoire

Scapegoat

Allure of Darkness

Poison of the Old Man

Traps 11:

Sakurestu Armor

Dust Tornado

Dark Illusion (2)

Waboku

Call of the Haunted

Seven tools of the Bandit

Negate Attack

Metal Refect Slime

Zoma The spirit

Magic Cylinders

Any And all criticism is welcomed. I wish to make a good deck ;)

Answer 1

it is not original

Answer 2

I'm glad that you are trying to build a dark deck without Dark armed dragon, but this deck is allll over the place. You have dark world, trap monsters, burn, and the new darks. I would suggest focusing on just dark world or the new darks.

This is a link to an interesting article about Dark return decks without Dark Armed Dragon.

http://www.metagame.com/yugioh.aspx?tabi...

Even without DAD, some of these cards are too pricy. if you are on a budget, then make replacements accordingly.

Good Luck!

Answer 3

i think you can do better.

Answer 4

thats an absolute 10 deck i would think. the only thin you would need to do is to take out call of the haunted and switch it for a monster reborn or a premature burial because call of the haunted is banned now.

Answer 5

Im not really an expert on these type of decks so I would try and correct your monster line up too much. But I definately see ways that you can help this deck already just by skimming through your spell and trap sections. First off Call of the Haunted is banned, so you can replace it with Premature Burial. Secondly, Negate Attack and Waboku both arent very good, you are losing 1 card while your opponent loses none, you should replace them with a Mirror Force and a second Sakuretsu Armor. If you cant obtain a Mirror Force just go for 3 Sakuretsu Armor's its not limited. Also your deck count in itself is a bit high, reduce it to 40-42 cards. It may not seem like a bit difference but it can be crucial. Replace Nobleman of Crossout with Shield Crush. You should add in a Marshmallon and possible Treeborn Frog/ Snipe Hunter as well, Especially Snipe Hunter with this given deck list. I would take out something for Bottomless Trap Hole also. Overall I think this is a pretty good deck, I like the Zoma/Metal Reflect Slime with Mage Power. But like I said I dont know as much about dark decks so you may want to find someone to help you with your monsters a bit more in depth than what Ive said.