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Question

need ideas for a yugioh zombie deck swarm. I already have some ideas and have a mill zombie but want to change i just want to know if i might have missed something.

I was thinking something like this

MONSTERS 22

x3 Mezuki

x3 Zombie Master

x3 Pyramid Turtle

x3 Goblin Zombie

x3 Mystic Tomato

x2 Ryu Kokki

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Morphing Jar

x1 Il Blud

x1 Card Trooper

MAGICS 15

x3 Book of Life

x2 Card of Safe Return

x1 Foolish Burial

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Call of the Mummy

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 MST

x1 Lighting Vortex

x1 Card Destruction

x1 Hand Destruction

x1 Veil of Darkness

x1 Smashing Ground

TRAPS 7

x1 Mirror Force

x3 Phoenix Wing Blast

x1 Ceasefire

x1 Transmigration Prophecy

x1 Magic Cylinder

SPAMMERS WILL BE REPORTED

Answer 1

This deck is awesome. The only thing that I see that needs improvement on is speed and defense. Add 2 Allure of Darkness to help speed and give hand advantage and the add 2/3 Solemn Judgement. Those would make this deck META worthy for tourneys

Also 1 more Il Blud wouldn't hurt, but I know its hard to get.

Until the new zombie structure deck comes out, this is the best a Zombie deck can get.

Answer 2

im gonna rate your deck so i would apreciate it if you looked at mine its in card game prettys close to the top k aftert looking at your deck it seems like you need to get rid of mystic tomatoe ond replace it with a bette ]r effect that is more accustomed to your deck like more zombie monsters

i give this deck 6 out of 10  

Answer 3

i say ur zombie deck is quite good but myself (i have a zombie deck) i added much stronger zombies eg. Vamp. Lord Curse of Vamp. Patrician of Darkness Vamp. Genesis and Despair from the Dark

and add 3 call of the mummy, mauseleum of the emperor and 1 reasoning and 2 monster gayte and only 1 il blud COME ON GET 3