Rate and Help Fix my Yugioh Zombie Deck

Question

This is what I have in mind...(note-trying to avoid crush card and il blud since they are pretty expensive to add on to everything):

Monsters: x 18

1x Morphing Jar

2x ryu kokki

3x goblin zombie

2x plague wolf

3x pyramid turtle

3x zombie master

1x card trooper

1x sangan

2x giant rat

1x neo-spacian grand mole

1x spirit reaper

1x snipe hunter

Spells: x 17

3x Book of Life

1x Heavy Storm

1x Monster Reborn

2x Creature Swap

1x Nobleman of Crossout

3x Card of Safe Return

1x Premature Burial

1x Brain Control

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Nobleman of Extermination

1x Smashing Ground

Traps: x 6

2x Deck Devastation Virus

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Dust Tornado

1x Call of the Haunted

1x Mirror Force

Side Deck: x 5

2x Allure of Darkness

3x Inferno Reckless Summon

Please help me improve my deck! Thank you =)

This was a suggestion from before:

Here is a start you can work off of since I can see you have a lot of cards that don't really need to be played.

monsters

[2-3]Despair from the Dark

[3]Zombie Master

[3]Ryu Kokki

[3]Mezuki (look this up if you don't know what it does)

[3]Goblin Zombie

[3]Pyramid Turtle

[2-3]D.D. Crow

then try some of these Sangan, Spirit Reaper, Snipe Hunter, Neo-Spacacian Grand Mole, and Destiny Hero Disk Commander.

spells

[3]Card of Safe Return

[3]Book of Life

[1-3]Lightning Vortex

[1-2]Burial from a Different Dimension (for mezuki or if your cards get hit by an opponents D.D. Crow)

then of course Monster Reborn and Premature.

traps

[3]Solemn Judgment (or any other counter trap you want if you can't get Solemn, or even run 2 Royal Decree here)

[1-2]Limit Reverse (only if you use Disk Commander and don't use Decree)

the Torrential Tribute and Mirror Force.

This is a basic list to give you ideas, hope it helps.

Answer 1

add 2 return zombies

Answer 2

Your deck looks pretty good. I mean not much you can do without Il Blud.

you should definatly add 3 Mezuki and 2 D.D. Crow

you should add Call of the Mummy. Its sooooo good for swarm, but only 2 cuz if you have 1 on the field already, its a dead draw.

Time Seal is BANNED!

so try this build

3 Zombie Master

3 P Turtle

3 Mezuki

2 Goblin Zombie

3 Ryu Kokki

2 Vampire Lord

2 D.D. Crow

1 Grand Mole

1 Spirit reaper

3 CoSR

3 Book of Life

2 Call of the Mummy

1 monster reborn

1 premature

2 Creature swap

1 mst

1 storm

1 Lightning Vortex

3 Solemn

3 Bottomless

1 Mirror Force

I know its a lot of cards, but its a good build without Il Blud

Answer 3

I have recently made a zombie deck and will list a few cards that i happen to find useful...

MONSTERS

Patrician of Darkness  x2-3

Vampire Lady  x2

Vampire Lord  x2-3

you might want to add a Double Coston if you add 2 or more lvl 7+ dark monsters

possibly a Vampire Genesis

Decayed Commander  x1(if you use this card, add a Zombie Tiger as a union for it)

SPELLS

adding a few Ekibyo Drakmords could come in handy for clear opponents monsters, altho it takes a few turns to take effect, but returns to your hand after use

Nitro Unit is a good spell for hitting your opponent high life point damage if you use it with Ekibyo Drakmord on an opponents monster with high att

Convulsions of Nature is good card to use if you want to see what your opponent is up to. Unfortunately, it turns both your decks face up so you wont be able to do much either

TRAPS

Spirit barrier is good to use with Spirit Reaper because your battle damage is reduce to 0 as long as its on the field

Time Seal is good for buying time with Ekibyo but only works if they havent any good cards in their hand

that just a few of the useful cards I could think of, hope it helps you out!