Rate and comment on my d.d. deck?

Question

monsters21

berserk gorrila x2

d.d. warrior lady

gear golem the moving fortress

d.d. survivor x2

la jinn the mystical genie of the lamp

d.d. scout plane x2

dimensional alchemist

sabersaurus

helios duo megistus

helios the primordial sun

dark master zorc

d.d. assailant

gren maju da eiza

d.d. master

summoned skull

cat of ill omen

golden homunculus x2

spells11

card destruction

mystical space typhoon

enemy controller

dimensional fissurex3

soul absorbtion

magical mallet

advanced ritual art

foolish burial

d.d. reincarnation

traps10

macro cosmos x3

shadow spell

metalmorph

karma cut

magic cylinder

dust tornado

return from a different dimension

damage condenser

so again rate my deck and i am always open to constructive criticism thx

Answer 1

just one word AWSOME! great job!

Answer 2

it needs some changes:

1. What is with the la jinn the mystical genie of the lamp!

2. D.D. Survivor, you should try to get 3 of. it is good

3. try putting d.d. dynamite

4. Need dark Magician of chaos (remember, it removes the monster es it destroys

5. What is with sabersaorus?!

6. "                   " Summoned Skull

7. you need Light laser

8. Try bottomless trap hole

9. Put in a soul release

10. Banisher of the light has high def., and removes cards too

11. Light of redemption, good with d.d. Warrior Lady, Banisher of the light etc.

12.  i think you d.d. warrior